Please critique my sales page

Hey all

I’ve been trying to get more funnels for my eccom stores working on Google Ads to diversify away from FB. When testing FB landing pages on google, I’ve found they work horribly. So I’ve been trying to do some research into what is currently working on Google at the moment.

This is what I’ve come up with. https://promotion.harmonichealth.co.za/best-arthritis-foods/

Would love some critque from experienced copywriters.

So that some might get something out of the post, I’ll also be post ...